Thursday 19 July 2012

From Deep Within My Heart in Rictameter style.



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Gushing
A brook of life
Those drum rolls exploding
Heart and soul both rolled into one
Combined with tomorrow's maturity
Rhymes so tried and tested
Flow along with that great ease
Your brand new life
Gushing.

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Rainbow
That pot of gold
Each excited note pound
My eager heart in silent tone
Each footstep so magnetic to the core
Draws me into tangled moments
To digest or to fall
A golden day's
Rainbow.



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Raindrops
Yes angel's tears
To nurture flowing life
Nature's gems stand up with great pride
Each petal or leaf almost magnified
Each eager heart swells;such wonder
Almost hopping
Raindrops.

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Snowflakes
Fragile beauty
Precious paper doilies
Each young face filled with wonder
Innocent and tender
Those beautiful
Snowflakes.



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Thunder
Distant rumbles
Looming skies filled so bleak
Slim fingers of a bright blue sky
The scent  fills each new cushioned tomorrow
Tones of a rumbling drum call
Blue skies fill each crevice
A decreasing
Thunder.

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2 comments:

  1. Oh wow!!! Love these rictometer poems, love the 'Gushing' babbling brook, love the distant rumbles of "Thunder but I have a favourite - you guessed it, can't go past the angel's tears in Raindrops!!! Beautiful metered poetry by a master poet!!!

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  2. Oh thank you so much Annie;your friendship and support mean so much !!!
    I often think as to how empty life would be if I hadn't decided to publish online that day just over two years ago now.However as always I believe that some things are meant to be.
    Take care and enjoy your day.
    Eddy.

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